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Just follow the wind
Just follow the wind
where all does it go
as at my death
I too will begin to glow
doc be assured
I'll take my hearing aids
so that I can still
hear your stories well made
glasses I'll very much need
else the morning sun's glare
I won't be able to stare
your sweet face so clean
will be indelibly implanted
on my mind's virtual screen
doc hold on
just tell me
where you will be seen
around heavens
I have already surveyed once
to every place I've been
'tis just lovely
believe me
when you are in ICU again
let me know
I may also along with you go
two is always good company
he will be happy
lesser for him
will be his worry
where to fook for thee
some better symphony
like you'd love to have me
be happy
I will not
then bore ye
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Gracy
Sun, 2020-11-22 15:14
Dear L, what did you dream
Dear L, what did you dream last Night? Something I've missed? LOL
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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury
lovedly
Sun, 2020-11-22 15:44
Just follow the wind
Just follow the wind
where all does it go
as at my death
I too will begin to flow
doc be assured
I'll take my hearing aids
so that I can still
hear your stories well made
glasses I'll very much need
else the morning sun's glare
I won't be able to directly stare
but your sweet face so clean
will be indelibly implanted
on my mind's virtual screen
doc hold on
just tell me
where you will be seen
around heavens
I have already surveyed once
to every place I've been
'tis just lovely
believe me
when you are in ICU again
let me know
I may also along with you go
two is always good company
HE will be happy
lesser for him
will be HIS worry
where to find for thee
some better symphony
like you'd love to have me
be happy
I will not
then bore ye
O docky
lovedly
Mon, 2020-11-23 15:49
afresh
ma'am