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Immortal
Memories are the imprints
everlasting ones
on the footprints
maybe now finger prints
in time
but all evade us
even does time
but memories take
much longer
these after all
none can erase
it’s an inevitable phase
today becomes a yesterday
and
tomorrow
we hope to play
with as a fresh today
then memories
more will form
how then would these impressions
be washed/wiped away
can you friend or foe or anyone
that ever say
my memories have become
immortal memoirs from today
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
scribbler
Mon, 2019-11-18 17:13
Hi Loved
Yes memories, especially this owned by others are a route to immortality
lovedly
Tue, 2019-11-19 23:40
thanks 4 ur comments stan
more later
lovedly
Wed, 2019-11-20 22:16
who else
agrees please