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Remember Me Pop
Hi Pop
I have composed many
Moms’ poems
on dad
perhaps only one
but your dad
I would love to salute
and
add what a charming one
he has produced in you
as a loving son
Dads have to be outwardly harsh
spare the rod and spoil the child
all moms love sons and daughters
but from harsh treatment
they shy away
and
How I wish I had a dad like yours
would he care to bless me
kindly ask
for me
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Simon
Tue, 2019-05-07 07:55
Hi lovely
It's been a long time
Well that's a good one there "spare the rod and spoil the child" though is a choice any way thanks for that piece of poem.
lovedly
Tue, 2019-05-07 13:25
kindness thanks for the read
many just pass by
like the
MISSISSIPPI
long tymes memory my brain registers everything
lovedly
Tue, 2019-05-07 21:14
well well well
WAIT AND SEE
REMEMBERING POP
IS THE ONE TO READ
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