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LOVELY CEMENTED FORESTS
Forests of cement
if there is any beauty
between
Cement and Forest
and
any Love between
man and woman
'tis here
on mommy
Earth
let all the waters
not wash it away
Love is very dear
very costly
here
part of mother
Earth
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Rula
Thu, 2019-02-28 07:20
I like
the 'cement forest' expression, but I couldn't find its connection to love
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lovedly
Thu, 2019-02-28 09:32
@80
sets in senility
so grant it
Rula
Cloudthings
Fri, 2019-03-01 02:05
Very much enjoyed this little perspective
For me it felt like a seeking of goodness (love) in what we have before us, be it natural or even hideous concrete. I really enjoyed it, in simple warm & amicable poetry. Lovely.
Cheers
Anni
My dear friend always told me "Water the seeds of joy first"
lovedly
Fri, 2019-03-01 02:14
such sweet comments maiden
you put life into my ''cement'' thanks
above the clouds