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Beyond Eternity
Each day when I get up early
I wonder am I now standing
at the end or far edge of eternity
as I am graduating into eighty
will let you all know
whether all who knew
recognized me
so remain standing by
I may still on the mommy Earth sigh
bit longer while
so continue to bless me
with your shining teeth
as you laugh or smile
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Rula
Mon, 2018-08-13 02:58
You be always
remembered Lovedly for your good heart.
I always thought that our life is counted by the deeds not years.
Enjoyed the sense of peace in this piece
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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lovedly
Mon, 2018-08-13 10:57
Thank you so much Rula for your kind words
I am happy at least
you will recall