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when right fight.... if wrong bow
I have been missing
your footsteps '
any ways
as I have been away
for so many days
perhaps
your footsteps
devushka/lady friends
came my way
deaf as I am
you may say
can't hear your footsteps
as always
hardly you speed across
now a days
my pathways
dobri denh...
good day wishes
come from
Niagara
again
from lovedla
la la lala
lol
can you now hear
my silent steps
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
IRiz
Fri, 2018-04-27 08:55
I try to walk quietly
I try to walk quietly
Not to disturb Lovedly
IRiz
lovedly
Fri, 2018-04-27 14:15
great Irene
I knew you'd read it
on your place
jess would've cursed me
thanks
tread softly
be worldly
many thieves are lurking
dangerously
IRiz
Fri, 2018-04-27 14:41
You poor soul, having a lot
You poor soul, having a lot of troubles on Neopoet. Just write on.
IRiz
lovedly
Fri, 2018-04-27 14:53
O Irene not to worry
on another site 1000 read me daily
and
yet on another one
at least 300 plus regularly
my poetry is exquisite
neo wants Victorianics'
Your Sunku now shall lead
I will also compose
but help me with syllables counting
on fingers I do poorly
IRiz
Fri, 2018-04-27 15:17
Hahaha, counting is not
Hahaha, counting is not important.
IRiz
lovedly
Fri, 2018-04-27 15:20
OK yes
2
3
4
x three times well
I will sunku
soonly
IRiz
Fri, 2018-04-27 17:35
Sweet.
Sweet.
IRiz
lovedly
Fri, 2018-04-27 23:29
soon
shall sunku tweet