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Tears alone well
Tears do well
Tears or a tear
Raises emotions
in yes, don't fear
in any human
A PM like Churchill
the solidest man
in the ''Dark Hour''
had a tear well up
I think the word
tear does 'well'
does well...
and
it glimmers like a diamond...
reminds one of the diamond ring
in the solar eclipse
if you have seen
don't mind my ellipse....
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
IRiz
Thu, 2018-04-26 10:23
Tears and diamonds...
Tears and diamonds...
Thank you for posting your sparkling write.
It was a pleasure to read.
I liked the use of the word eclipse.
It addad a lot to the shine.
IRiz
lovedly
Thu, 2018-04-26 10:28
wow o Irene friend
Now
I believe in telepathy
just a second ago
I posted a comment on Raj's Sunku
In respect of friendly creative you
Irene
Dobridenh
IRiz
Thu, 2018-04-26 11:08
Today, sunku is spotlighted
Today, sunku is spotlighted on official Google page, take a look if you want
https://plus.google.com/+googleplus/posts/2e7czfukPNd
IRiz
lovedly
Thu, 2018-04-26 12:02
congrats sunku promoter
shall and will
do I have to hear it
deafy me
u know it
tyro
Thu, 2018-04-26 15:05
what a lovedly poem.
Hi Lovedly, what a lovedly poem. I love its playfulness with the word well, something I can appreciate very well..
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
lovedly
Thu, 2018-04-26 15:54
all thy inspiration
tyro O one
and
only you spring well
in unique poetry
let tears also in gratitude
our eyes well
'twill be swell
poetry does ring the bell....
raj
Thu, 2018-04-26 15:52
inspired by your theme Lovedly
Tears do well
from emotional depths
may shine as crystals
or die an instant death
even add to the canvas
a human touch
from where they come
when and how
even if I know
they still will jerk
in moments of
sheer overwhelment
shed in black or white
.............................................
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Thu, 2018-04-26 15:57
and dear Raj_sublime
'''''they still will jerk+++++++++++++
what a manly connotatiion
as you swell
hope soonly all be well
now sunku it raj _sublime
squeeze it
like LIME.......