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Lucky boy friend
I recall seeing a gal
eyeing her boyfriend
he looked at her too
she waved come over
and there and then
right in the open
she jumped upon him
like a cat does on a lady
she clawed at him tightly
and they smooched
all could see
none bother in the west
as must be knowing ye
she pulled him closer
and went behind the trees
what must have happened next
is any body's guess
you are right
we all heard loud moans
the park was not empty
all clapped as they came from behind the trees
totally wet and blushing
under the waterfall perhaps
you had also similarly been
hopefully unmindful y unseen
lucky be thee
I've had no such experience
married very, very early
so be happy it was she
here many go
with gays
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Marvel Godwyn
Sun, 2017-12-03 12:22
Quite romantic Lovedly
Quite romantic Lovedly.Beautifully composed.
lovedly
Sun, 2017-12-03 12:47
thanks based on your
experience
with ref your poem lucky boy poem
Creativity you like it
so do I and dude
u are n engineer
I a scientist
Marvel Godwyn
Sun, 2017-12-03 13:20
Yes I am Lovedly.Good to know
Yes I am Lovedly.Good to know you are a scientist, that's really great.
lovedly
Sun, 2017-12-03 22:32
thankx
GM