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smiles but silent
Silent Smiles...
In silence she smiles...
She produces a kid annually...
her hubby doesn't like condoms casually.......
Silently she smiles as an insane one....
she cannot conceive since four years...
her hubby fears....
his semen maybe infertile...
but she continues to smile
as if she alone is barren...
a woman...
Yet both hold on
to their smiling countenance
to let others also smile...
So quietly enjoy your life
as you alone
SILENTLY SMILE..
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Esker
Sat, 2016-09-24 18:38
knew many from huge families
fourteen kids...
we were six
but foster and adopted
and even today I was
talking discussing
men and women who marry
and the men after a few
kids...one two get fixed
snipped...I thought it was
control so the men cannot
create families out of wedlock
but a woman set it straight.
so they dont get pregnant
again..and that its easier
healthwise for a man to
get fixed then too fix a
woman...which made
sense....
keep the stiff upper lip
the old school way
proper...
as usual a great poem
with your vend on things
and voice
Thank U!
lovedly
Sat, 2016-09-24 20:37
esker how can I thank thee
for thy comments
so lovely
for lovedly
Esker
Sat, 2016-09-24 20:42
Like the talented and encouraging Sommer says..Keep it up!
just keep writing!
I am a fan of your works
just got a cheeky way
of putting things out there
thank U!
lovedly
Sat, 2016-09-24 20:50
its for no reason that I
admire you
I can't comment on your poetry
its far too lovely
as it all is for me
thank you for your indulgence
I read fan some where above
no its getting cold now here
its 14 degrees today
I just returned from the highway
lovedly
Sun, 2021-10-03 23:19
for those who
missed this
only read what dear Esker had to say i bow he was too brilliant a poet