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Who Am I (my version only )
So many have composed poems
on
'Who Am I'
You are a Lords
also Gods guy
I alone am a seed of Intelligence
No one knows tomorrow
all time we always borrow
we think in or own steeled way
Divine unshaken!
our whole desire
want others also to say
I alone am right
Perhaps you maybe,
but let me catch
my last flight
see me flying away
from all that is humanly
your Gods will!!!
I will dwell in heaven not lonely,
all you guys will be
around me Spiritually
having lost a life of enjoyment
on Earth
only Researching darker tunnels of time
while here alone there is light
Now re- read me
but Slowly
This is my Research only
not of few minutes
‘tis taken me a life time
70 plus years may be
Play safe with me
let your God
remain with thee
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Vivovon
Fri, 2016-08-12 11:55
I do not know
To be honest, I am not sure who I am. May be I am just a passerby. The theme is interesting. I am familiar with Earth, but not with heaven or gods. It reads pretty good.
xxxxx
lovedly
Fri, 2016-08-12 16:17
thanks a mighty
vivon you have an opinion of your own
we all must have