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if I only knew
if I only knew
Why would I come to ask you
Await my deliberations will you
I shall start afresh anew
If only I knew
why should I divulge to you
just for a comments too few
what ails me to reach my goal
If only I knew
why would I ask you
Well stand by as you say
I must address myself
God pray
If only I knew
I'd love to share with you
what I'd love to do
to have to give to share
If only I knew
The lips would part
like two lips as you show
so beautifully
Yes but only If I knew
what you want to know
about me
if I only knew
Yes, If only
I knew .....
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geremia
Fri, 2015-10-23 10:47
Now you know. So let's go on,
Now you know. So let's go on, my friend.
lovedly
Sat, 2015-10-24 00:28
yes we must
thanks Joe
raj
Fri, 2015-10-23 13:44
i believe through oversight
i believe through oversight you have missed the "I" in the concluding verse Lovedly...I note that you have adopted a different style...good to know that..
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sat, 2015-10-24 11:45
my dear Raj... sublime in the Indian ocean
how sweetly you convey and silently too
no wonder the world loves poets like you
when are you coming again to Usa or Canada
would love to meet you
[email protected]???? or [email protected]
no wrong
never mind we must remain calm ...kind and sublime