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O O O give me a kiss eh!
O O O give me a kiss eh!
hahahahaaa
you said it friend
give me a kiss eh!
never give in
when loss is assured...
but you may still win
I always advise my kids
''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
BUT DO ASK
IT MAY BECOME A ''YES''
ELSE HOW WILL IT EVER
IF YOU REMAIN SILENT?
They smile and say
Give a 100 dollars
right away
I can only afford ten
they take it happy and go away
and
KISS MY NOSE FOR FREE!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
wesley snow
Sat, 2015-04-04 17:25
This is silly,
but funny.
W. H. Snow
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lovedly
Sat, 2015-04-04 18:25
too much seriosness is sad
and as u said
never remove/unpublish
some bigger idiot will love it
and that's not bad! so be it
Sir,
Snowman glory be to thee
Sparrow
Sat, 2015-04-04 18:34
Loved
you give the Kids too much money, let them earn it, each Dollar would be worth double as it will help you and also help them in many ways.
You can send any extra to me, let me know when you have some, I shall send my address then..
Take care, mind you the write needs a tidy but is good, I am waiting for another of excellence from you,
Yours Ian
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lovedly
Sat, 2015-04-04 19:20
did you mean
more excellent?
needing morer tidying
hahaahhaaa
Ian donno be sooooo funny
this is poetry honey
no no money
cents maybe for thee
for chewing gum may be
Sparrow
Sun, 2015-04-05 18:54
Loved
When I buy chewing gum I just suck off the coating then throw the rest away, my old teeth don't take kindly to chewing much lol, Big straws and a damn good blender that's the way to go,
Have a great holiday, I have to go visit my Kin on the other side of the mountain here, damn it Sister's grandkids reaching 21.
Sadie and the children send their love as always, Yours Ian
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mand
Sun, 2015-04-05 03:42
Hi Lovedly
Brilliant, I love it, it's filled with love and family happiness.
I'm still smiling
Love Mand :)
xxxxx
lovedly
Sun, 2015-04-05 10:19
do you see a contrast
silly above as per...Snow man
and brilliant as per you...
let others smile too
but thank you
raj
Sun, 2015-04-05 14:36
Lovedly
I think you can make it better...
Happy Easter to you and your beloveds.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sun, 2015-04-05 15:54
hahahaahaa raj in the _sublime _ indien ocean
thanks
my beloved now doesn't think so
hahahaah here we go
gone old .................
thank s ur still bold
to Canadien philosophy
fully now sold
its still cold!
raj
Sun, 2015-04-05 16:15
Lovedly
sorry for my comment....it was just a suggestion and no more..don't think much about it..
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sun, 2015-04-05 16:46
why sorry?
I liked it
that's why I replied it
in any case snow stated '''silly''
and mand said '''brilliantly''
and Ian smiled
you commented
it made Easter easier for everybody
now friend laugh will ye
with me
Let's all be happy
poetry is meant for a release
no!
alidzain
Mon, 2015-04-06 15:23
silly but funny
still lovable, I say!
I do say, sir
have it your way!
Alid
lovedly
Mon, 2015-04-06 18:34
you do well cover all
Snowman
Mand and Raj
of course Ian
and who sir?
you!
alidzain
Tue, 2015-04-07 02:34
me?
you forget me? (giving lovedly a dirty look) grrrr.
Alid
Sparrow
Mon, 2015-04-06 18:36
Loved
The comments and replies bring smiles to me faster than granny tripping up the stairs lol.
No I is not cruel just a figure of speech lol.
Yours, Ian.
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lovedly
Tue, 2015-04-07 09:52
my dear I as in Ian,
c how @times silliness like this
brings Happiness
like that
brilliant idea!
weirdelf
Sun, 2017-10-15 17:45
A free kiss on the nose
is not to be sneezed at.
cheers,
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lovedly
Sun, 2017-10-15 19:58
you give life
to my 2015 kiss
come alive
how nay times did you sneeze
I shall send that many cents
if you please
suffering from allergic rhinitis
can't give any more
for free
'tis allergic
as infratitus!
google you won' know
thanks though