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If you do recall Joe
if you do recall
I had promised you
you will get across Xmas and new year too
my prediction has come true
through new year2015
poems many more you will compose
and in you all neopoet does confidence impose
as per some repose
happy be the light
the tomorrow
as and when it comes
no one knows when
not for one....
Give this site the fillip needed now
your poetry is read by all and how
cause you are
the ALIVEST POET now!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
mand
Mon, 2015-01-05 11:26
:)
This is a positive and up building tribute to young Joe! especially the last stanza - high five to both of you!
Love Mand xxxx
raj
Mon, 2015-01-05 12:42
Hi Alid
Good sentiments nicely expressed in this write. Shows your empathy and good will.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Tue, 2015-01-06 10:02
and and why
mention of Alid here
raj Dear sublime ?