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Wicked

Submitted by RoseBlack on Mon, 2023-02-27 22:03

Tempter
Wicked waters
Drag me down underneath
Moral compass shattered wholely
Charmer

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words: 
Cinquain
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Tue, 2023-02-28 09:11

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Thoughts alone, do not make for sins.
I guess that moral compasses, are sometimes affected by magnetic personalities.
A nicely done Cinquain. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

RoseBlack

Tue, 2023-02-28 10:22

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Sometimes those magnets temporarily erase all that is right and wrong and leave desire, longing and a need to be loved. Thank you for the read and comment.

~RoseBlack~

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Lavender

Tue, 2023-02-28 21:07

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Hi, Carrie,
Really like this!

Thank you,
L

RoseBlack

Tue, 2023-02-28 21:50

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Cinquain is my new favorite! I'm going to explore some other styles soon.

~RoseBlack~

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