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Wicked waters
Drag me down underneath
Moral compass shattered wholely

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Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Not Explicit Content


Thoughts alone, do not make for sins.
I guess that moral compasses, are sometimes affected by magnetic personalities.
A nicely done Cinquain. ~ Geez.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Sometimes those magnets temporarily erase all that is right and wrong and leave desire, longing and a need to be loved. Thank you for the read and comment.


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Hi, Carrie,
Really like this!

Thank you,

Cinquain is my new favorite! I'm going to explore some other styles soon.


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