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Wicked
Tempter
Wicked waters
Drag me down underneath
Moral compass shattered wholely
Charmer
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words:
Cinquain
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-28 09:11
Hmmmm...
Thoughts alone, do not make for sins.
I guess that moral compasses, are sometimes affected by magnetic personalities.
A nicely done Cinquain. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack
Tue, 2023-02-28 10:22
Truth
Sometimes those magnets temporarily erase all that is right and wrong and leave desire, longing and a need to be loved. Thank you for the read and comment.
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Tue, 2023-02-28 21:07
Wicked
Hi, Carrie,
Really like this!
Thank you,
L
RoseBlack
Tue, 2023-02-28 21:50
Thank you
Cinquain is my new favorite! I'm going to explore some other styles soon.
~RoseBlack~