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My Sister loves Freddy Krueger

Submitted by Triskelion on Mon, 2023-10-09 13:29

my sister who dates Freddy Krueger
is safe 'cause she carries a Luger
it's a balance (of sorts)
-as he messes his shorts
when she points it and makes him eat boogers

Last few words: 
...poking fun...Cheers! 1. tweaked the grammar- added parentheses.
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Contest: 
October 2023 Challenge Date night with Freddy Krueger
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Ruby Lord

Mon, 2023-10-09 13:40

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Love it, I'm still laughing, thank you. Ruby :)

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Triskelion

Mon, 2023-10-09 13:47

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...she's not my favourite sister, but I do respect her...lol
Thanks Ruby!

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

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Lavender

Mon, 2023-10-09 14:26

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I bow to your limerick!
Well done!
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Triskelion

Mon, 2023-10-09 14:43

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..is the potatoes of limericks. Goes with the (meat)re. This one's not perfect, but c'est la vie!
Cheers Lavender!

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

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Geezer

Tue, 2023-10-10 08:19

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the limericks. A perfect match for the Halloween holiday. Nicely done. ~ Geezer.
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Triskelion

Tue, 2023-10-10 10:19

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Limericks are my favourite form and always present a challenge. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

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Lamington

Fri, 2023-10-13 11:22

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Who's Freddy Krueger?

Triskelion

Fri, 2023-10-13 12:20

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....not really sure...maybe I will look it up on the internet.

Cheers

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

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