The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Gaslight (2)" is a powerful exploration of the psychological manipulation and abuse often seen in toxic relationships. The use of alternating voices and perspectives provides a stark contrast between the abuser and the victim, effectively highlighting the emotional turmoil and manipulation involved in such situations.

The use of strong, evocative language and imagery contributes to the overall impact of the poem. Phrases such as "Boots outside the door; shuffling, scuffling", "His voice rumbles like thunder", and "Blood dripping, her sanity ebbed and flowed like the tide" paint vivid pictures that engage the reader's senses and emotions.

The poem could benefit from a more consistent use of poetic devices such as rhyme, rhythm, and meter to enhance its musicality and flow. The current structure, while effective in conveying the raw emotion and intensity of the subject matter, can be somewhat disjointed and abrupt, which may disrupt the reader's engagement.

The use of clichés such as "How do you tell an angel from an asshole?" and "Cheshire grin" could be replaced with more original and unique expressions to avoid detracting from the poem's overall impact and to maintain the reader's interest.

Lastly, the poem's ending could be more impactful. While the current ending effectively conveys the tragic outcome of the situation, it could be further developed to provide a more profound commentary on the cycle of abuse and its devastating consequences. This could be achieved through the use of more powerful imagery, metaphor, or symbolism.

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~ Geez.
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it reminds me of the vignettes we did in a workshop one time.
Were you in that one?
Anyway, nice job of keeping my interest, this could be an interesting little play
for an amateur group. I could tell the differences of personality in the characters.
I feel this is far too close to home here. I hope the writing of this helps at least a little.

Geez.
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once again, it feels like you have opened a portal into my life of long ago! I was spellbound, like a deer caught in the headlights, as I read this masterpiece of a"study in terror"! you have captured the essence of a situation that is experienced by many. sadly, these victims are usually distanced from their families and cut of from their friends. this is your best work so far!

*love, Cat

I can taste every toxic word written here. It's revealing that both characters are at odds with each other and we are able to understand the issues and problems they face on either side of the argument. It would make a great opening scene for a script, I can think of a few that use this form. Well done Ruby :)