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My Sister loves Freddy Krueger
my sister who dates Freddy Krueger
is safe 'cause she carries a Luger
it's a balance (of sorts)
-as he messes his shorts
when she points it and makes him eat boogers
Last few words:
...poking fun...Cheers!
1. tweaked the grammar- added parentheses.
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Comments
Ruby Lord
Mon, 2023-10-09 13:40
Love it, I'm still laughing,
Love it, I'm still laughing, thank you. Ruby :)
Give and grow - let's raise our verses together. I'm happy to comment on your work and appreciate a comment on mine.
Triskelion
Mon, 2023-10-09 13:47
Yep...
...she's not my favourite sister, but I do respect her...lol
Thanks Ruby!
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Lavender
Mon, 2023-10-09 14:26
My Sister...
I bow to your limerick!
Well done!
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Triskelion
Mon, 2023-10-09 14:43
...silliness.
..is the potatoes of limericks. Goes with the (meat)re. This one's not perfect, but c'est la vie!
Cheers Lavender!
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Geezer
Tue, 2023-10-10 08:19
Nice seeing...
the limericks. A perfect match for the Halloween holiday. Nicely done. ~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Triskelion
Tue, 2023-10-10 10:19
Hey, Geezer
Limericks are my favourite form and always present a challenge. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Lamington
Fri, 2023-10-13 11:22
What?
Who's Freddy Krueger?
Triskelion
Fri, 2023-10-13 12:20
Hi again
....not really sure...maybe I will look it up on the internet.
Cheers
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood