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Thirty Four Years...
Soft eyes and a smile or two
you gazing my way
our Valentine's Day for two
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Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-14 09:08
Frankly...
I can't see how she has put up with me so long. Thanks for the read and comment. ~ Geez.
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Rosewood Apothecary
Tue, 2023-02-14 19:37
I say that all the time
I. Am. Impossible. Loads of emotions fly around of nearly every variant. The wife just does the impossible everyday.
Tim
Seren
Tue, 2023-02-14 05:15
Dearest Bro
Send my love to your love, it's gorgeous the connection you guys have,
I have always said how nice it would be if someone wrote a valentine's poem for me. it's a gift I've never been blessed to received but you first need a partner in crime. lol
Congratulation's sweets I will talk to you soon.
love and higgliest bugs Sis xox
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-14 09:19
I think...
I have written one for her, almost every single Valentine's Day, [I may have missed a couple by being sick.]
Thanks Sis, we love you too. She says; "She's just been hanging with the wrong blokes!" LoL. Actually, she said; "She's just been hanging out with the wrong guys, try the little ones, they try harder!" We're having take-out Chinese tonight, maybe watch some movie or something. Just us! ~ Geez.
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Seren
Tue, 2023-02-14 20:59
Dearest Bro
I roared with laughter
"Try the little ones they try harder"
Oh my God I adore her she's hilarious
Tell her at nearly 6ft? my first boyfriend was a litt'un and the disparity in our Heights was incredible lmao I couldn't wear heels. I'm over 6ft in heels. Hahahaha
Tell her to find a nice tall one for me lol
Love you both dearly higgliest bugs Jayne xoxb
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Tue, 2023-02-14 06:51
CONGRATS GEEZ
As they told me HAIKU you call THE EAST ///has to have 17 words or ///
three lines verse as
575
yours appears as 757
I think I don't count syllables you know.... so ask someones who does know ...
ANY way congrats to your wife
she extracted from you a haikueeeeeeeeeeeee
and yes HAIKUS ARE
basically Japanese
Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-14 09:25
Yeah, I know...
traditional Haiku are 5-7-5 but we are untraditional types, anyway. The two of us, always been just a little of the black sheep of the family. Guess that's what brought us to the place we were, at the time we met. Both of us climbed a rocky road to the overlook where we are now. Thanks for the read and comment, ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Tue, 2023-02-14 11:34
just great
Gee now happy you B
B=brevity
Jackweb
Tue, 2023-02-14 12:59
Congratulations Gee..!
Her enthralling beauty must be one in a million.
" Soft eyes and a smile".
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-14 22:39
She has to be...
one in a million, in order to keep me in check! LoL~ Geez.
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Lavender
Tue, 2023-02-14 14:45
Thirty Four Years
Happy 34th Valentine's Day together!
L
Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-14 22:40
Thank you much...
It certainly has been an interesting thirty-four years! ~Geez.
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RoseBlack
Tue, 2023-02-14 22:37
Happy Valentine's Day
To the both of you! Beautiful write!
~RoseBlack~
Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-14 22:42
Thanks kid...
Someday it will be you! I'm sure of it! ~ Geez.
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