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Mamas Waiting Hopefully
BUT THE DOC
Says
HE Wonders
HOW I AM Holding
TO This Earth
Since Long
SO Long
HOW Much More
HE CAN'T Guess
BUT Does Profess
Some DAY
IF NOT Today
I Shall
AS I Must
GO Away
LET THE DAY Come
ONE DAY
Some DAY
ANY DAY
When
HE CAN'T Play Magic
HE'S A DOC Only
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-05-25 14:24
dear lovedly,
yes, he's only a doctor, not a magician. I hope you will be with us here for a long time to come. sometimes the pain is so bad, I wish my time would come Now! your poem made me think. about the good days to come. thank you.
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-05-25 15:56
D BEST way Cats is
Don't think of tomorrow so many guys told mommy my life is limited to 13 some unknown power changed it to 83 I will add on another decade jobless guys never die they need penance so carry on follow the leader ahh me!
lovedly
Fri, 2022-05-27 12:20
sabbatical nearing end
this week shall post afresh
O GEE