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POLLUTION POPULA-SHUN & POVERTY
These are normal
pollutants
now the world over
but see the positive side of it all
guess what lovedly has in mind
they say 2020 10 billions human
how will you feed?
so JESUS knew
well in advance
''THE MEEK WILL INHERIT THE EARTH'''
said He
MEEK IS NOT AFRAID ONES
but poor impoverished and weak
He meant hopefully
We all stand besides all humanity
don't we
such intelligent poetry
doesn't come easily
but rarely
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2019-01-19 00:49
You do write some gems
and unless I am missing some iron-fisted irony this is not one of them.
Your use of caps is gratuitous. I could go on at length at just how bad the poetry and ideas are but I am already quivering with rage.
If that was your intent your poem was a success, but a cheap shot.
I have deleted some of the worst vituperation
cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Fri, 2019-01-18 23:12
Thanx jess
this was a sequel to someone's content
Yes some aberrations exist will streamline some to create a gem
Else shall delete it will u give me time pl
Loved's salutations!
weirdelf
Sat, 2019-01-19 00:50
yeah, I saw this as a comment on someone else's work
that's what made me so angry.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
lovedly
Sat, 2019-01-19 05:31
reviewed jess
The meek shall inherit the Earth
meek is not afraid ones
but poor and weak
such intelligent poetry
scribbler
Sat, 2019-01-19 01:54
OK
I read it but it's 20clock at night and I'll have to get some shuteye before critique