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Dew Drop
Dewdrop.....
like a teardrop
falling from its eyes
Display through the
tiny crystal silver drops
Lingering on the exquisite
soft petal rose
Quenching the green thirst flourish leaf
Through the early misty morning rise
Waiting for the gentleness caressing
To dissolve from its cleaning touch
Ease away the misery bitterness frost cold
With a warmth nurturing quest embrace
To bring joy and delight to the new day
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Triskelion
Sun, 2022-12-11 12:52
reciprocity
Oh, dragonfly, your wistful verses sing
while dewdrops dry upon your crystal wing
Of you, I ponder; great and wondrous thing
and dream of lucky days you seem to bring
Oh! Come and rest a while; linger
Adorn my hand; a ring upon my finger
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Geezer
Mon, 2022-12-12 01:01
Looks like...
a close -up look at a flower in the early morning. ~ Geezer.
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Triskelion
Mon, 2022-12-12 17:26
It also seems
it may have a subliminal erotic flair to it.
I wonder…
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood