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My childhood favorite toy

My childhood favorite toy
given by a family’s legacy gift
since at the early age of 10
with a black reading telescope
brought back fond memories
from many lessons that inspired
by the instilled of the astronomy
with the fascinating of the stars
far beyond the gaze scenery
of the infinite universal
across from the vast of the sky
intrigued by the passionate desire
In seeking a thirst for knowledge
expand a quest of wish
with a curiosity of mind
for an in-depth understanding
how nature's instinct derived
from the inventive creative design

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Though it reads more like prose in lines
Still, an enjoyable read.
Thank you for sharing


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Hello, Hon,
What a wonderful family legacy and gift! Something to share within generations - the wonderment of the distant skies.
Thank you!

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