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Soup.
Eminent professors ev-ery-where,
even those bound to the chair,
all agree whid liddle ol' me-
we'll all be fucked even-tu-ally,
We're gonna die - we're gonna fry
pucker up n kiss yer arse g'bye.
it's difficult to comprehend
jus' when this shit is gonna end,
In a ball o' fire we're in the mire-
JEYZUS MAN,, we'll all expire !!
it may be quick o'er in flick;
clock is ticking tick tock tick,
Or it maybe slow the way ya go
- jus' 'nuf time fer one more blow,
either ways it's fair to say
we're gonna end up - - consommé.
Obi
Last few words:
With brown bread.
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Seren
Fri, 2023-02-24 12:09
Obi
We are screwed one day, I think I want it slow. not quick. I want to be able to sit back with a bourbon and embrace whatever end comes my way.
This is a cracker!! I can't see one thing I would change.
Bravo! & to a slow end, cheers!
Kind Regards Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Obadiah Grey
Tue, 2023-02-28 10:06
So, Jayne, let me get this
So, Jayne, let me get this straight,,,,
One day in the future, you'd like an alcohol
induced embrace followed by a slow screw
with a big end coming your way ?
Hee hee, God bless you !!!
I've been at the bourbon again,,, love, Obi.
author commentObadiah Grey
Tue, 2023-02-28 10:09
Life ain't worth livin were
Life ain't worth livin were it for not fer the bourbon Mark.
Cheers m'dears,,, Obi.
author commentIndivisible_Origin
Fri, 2023-02-24 16:58
pardon my french
But this is fucking amazeballs. Nicely done.
Obadiah Grey
Tue, 2023-02-28 10:10
Thank you Sir,
Thank you Sir,
its muchly appreciated,,,, Obi.
author commentLavender
Fri, 2023-02-24 19:50
Soup
Obi,
it's been well said,
"Best of Luck, and Amen!"
Now pass the brown bread!
L
Obadiah Grey
Tue, 2023-02-28 10:12
LOL,,,,
LOL,,,,
Curt and to the point, L.
Cheers, Obi.
author commentTriskelion
Sat, 2023-02-25 17:52
Hey Obi! YOU FIRST!
Obi Soup
the diner is serving a new soup du jour
it's broth is the froth from a gentleman's sewer
sautéed with his guts
au flambé on his butt
and his nuts that come grilled on a skewer!
Sorry, can't help myself. Keep that rhythm n rhyme going!
Thomas
.
.
...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Obadiah Grey
Tue, 2023-02-28 10:19
Oh, You know me so well !!!!
Oh, You know me so well !!!!
Thank you, Thomas.
For that liddle beaut,
reaally gave me a belly laugh !
Cheers, Obi.
author commentRuby Lord
Mon, 2023-03-27 13:57
Soup
What I really liked - You're offensive and arse kicking tone and profane words hammered that message home, excellent piece, I really enjoyed it.
You're definitely one to watch out for :) Ruby x
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