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Sex what’s love got to do with it

Submitted by Trouble on Wed, 2022-11-16 20:55

When my girl wants it bad
I think to myself sex
How long can I last?
Only to satisfy her is all that I ask
I am older now and my youth has passed
So what love got to do with it
Is the little blue pill to complete the task
My opinion is
Giving her all I can
Until she done
Only to satisfy her
Is my only plan

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Michael Keens

Wed, 2022-11-16 21:40

Sounds like you need to use the internet for different things other than poems

Geezer

Wed, 2022-11-16 23:42

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this feels raw, like the man in the poem; he feels how youthful her love makes him.
Remembering the early years of their relationship
when their passion was enough to...
without pills.

I'm thinking primal instinct
Survival
procreation...

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lovedly

Thu, 2022-11-17 11:52

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perhaps you meant
Until she's done

with stamina then
now bluish ones synchronization
between ejack and orgasm ..rarely possible
lol
good fun at any age ....when it's still done ---- time's just a limitation

now stand fast poet many at our age
are half mast!

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