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JJ

Submitted by Trouble on Fri, 2022-09-09 22:55

Pressley has many questions to explain
Can you love me
Julie needs this answer
To free her heart from the years of pain
Why me
my soul is chain
Julies relationship's
Consistency adds to her mind of blame
Tell me why when I look into the mirror
All I see is shame
This is a question that pressley needs to explain
Julie your beautiful more than your life of pain
I want you too believe that happiness
With me won't ever change
I promise to break that mirror of blame
With the words I love you and happiness
Erases the history that you can not shake

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
It's hard for my girlfriend to believe in true love
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content
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