talk about a act of wanting something bad, a beautiful Goddess you have created here.
I could see the whole ritual.
nice piece of off center writing. I like how you structured it.

Eddie

I loved this story of the Fulani woman of West Africa, I wish there were more writings on different cultures as this would open up the world to others.
I have been trying to get Ref (Iboro Offong) to do this as some of his poetry is like a history of his lands and people the other parts are of his feelings.
This is a lovely picture of one facet of a people that has brought me to learn of their ways, thank you again for such a write, Yours Ian.T

i liked this a lot! so very creative :)

Wow, loved this, strong & eloquent, such wonderfully evocative descriptions in a simple story. A masterful image of what seemed like an almost frozen moment.

Great job here.

A