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Lost in Summer

Submitted by Lepadah on Mon, 2012-07-16 10:54

The smell after removing soak sweat panties
cock before the room of only two eyes
her full summery incense
beads along the small platform breast
dewdrops freeing the hole

legs apart slow shaking
vintage Bebop
flip flop two cheeks
fanning summers heated tushy

stay . . . manifest
upon request
descriptive thorough blue note
on back of signature jacket of Bud Powell

her summery scent now pronounce
by tangle whips of humid air
from an open window low puffing voile
cast an usual aphrodisiac

quest hold of chance
sniffing under parted limbs
drinking warm drops
tender licks salt pubic feeler

spontaneously enthrall within her walls
of summer.

© 2012 Lepadah

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Ian.T

Sun, 2012-08-12 15:31

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If we can kill people and have Vampires strolling around, I am sure this is just another facet that many will be scared to comment on, But to me it might jog a few memories lol, Not sure what else to say,
Yours Sparrow

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judyanne

Mon, 2012-08-13 08:21

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with great descriptive
sadly, not my cup of tea... but i appreciate anyone who can write this genre

love judy
xxx

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shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
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Lepadah

Mon, 2012-08-13 10:21

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Thanks Judy

I appreciate the read/comment.

Peace 1 Lydia

Lepadah

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