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My journey

Submitted by Trouble on Wed, 2022-07-13 19:53

Only by faith
Will better days Arrive
I must remember the better days
The way we loved
Balanced
each day
surrendering always by compromise
To continue my journey
For better days to survive
I must let go
To give my heart freedom I need peace of mind
So within my heart for her a small part will be saved
A decision to love again at this point
Only faith will provide

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
My girlfriend passed away in May .I'm writing a tribute to her in poetry. She was the love of my life
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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c lynn brooks

Sun, 2022-07-17 13:58

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It seems you have been hurt beyond words. But you are ready to get back on that horse and ride again

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Candlewitch

Mon, 2022-07-18 03:22

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when the time is right, you will know it. but don't try to force it. you need time to heal, too. you have had a trauma to the heart, soul and psyche. give it all the time it needs for healing.

always, Cat

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