The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively uses everyday imagery and activities to convey a sense of longing, which is a common theme in romantic poetry. The use of specific details, such as the roast beef sandwich and the cookies, adds a sense of realism and relatability to the poem.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and rhyme scheme. The irregularity of the meter and the lack of rhyme make the poem feel somewhat disjointed.

The poem also seems to switch between different tones, from the "squishy, soaked with love feeling" to the more casual and humorous tone of the roast beef sandwich and cookies. This could potentially confuse the reader about the overall mood of the poem.

The poem could also benefit from the use of more poetic devices, such as metaphors and similes, to add depth and complexity to the imagery. For example, instead of simply stating "I can't imagine one of my days without you in it", the poet could use a metaphor to convey this feeling in a more creative and engaging way.

Lastly, the poem's ending could be more impactful. The current ending, while sweet, does not leave a lasting impression on the reader. A stronger, more memorable ending could elevate the overall quality of the poem.

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Hi, Geezer!
Love the title! I hope she did, too! The consequence of being separated for a full day - "The thought drives me nearly insane." A noble line. :)
Congratulations to you both, and many more,
L

a very big happy happy happy anniversary to you and your lovely Lady! Steven and I are at 42 years of living and loving! please give my best to your Lady. (I am impressed by both of our partners endurance!!!)

Loved the poem, Cat & crew