Firstly welcome to Neopoet,
Your writing a little macabre but well written and it read well, hope that the colour changes for you soon lol,
Take care out there,
Yours Ian.T

Your writting is exciting and chilling! I love it! (I also write dark poetry and identify it with the name eddy styx, in the title! eddy styx is my male alter ego, dark and murderous!) I loved the whole poem, it stirred my emotions and gave me a little shiver! Your style and language usage is superb! Favorite lines of imagery:

A presence lingers...a shadow hovers
around my bed...hands grab me
Reality catapults me out from my nightmare
And again I'm here...drenched in sweat

So I will not be here...I can't be there...
Grey is my favorite color.

p.s.

my favorite colors are black, red and purple!

always, Cat (& eddy)

hello! i like this dark thing you got going on. i think it could use a little touching up, but a very good start! nice.
always,
mag

the pain that is felt to want to do something evil, but our enbreaded humanity will not let us. yet we pay in our dreams with the emotion that follow us into our awoken state. Careful, it is how a serial killer is born.
I good piece of writing. driving the point deep into the conciousness.
thanks for sharing your dark place, it is a form of therapy to write of your pain.
Welcome to Neopoet, "land of the freed poet's"

Eddie C.
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A warm welcome to Neo Poet
I have just read your poem . You write in a very unusual way. It sounded to me as if you were arguing with yourself.

well done I look forward to reading more of your work
Chrys

wow soo morbid but AMAZING!!! i love it!!

I read your piece and it reminds me of a movie "Nightmare on Elms Street". Found it hard to sleep afterwards. lolz. Your poem has a dark imagery. I can almost still see and feel the blood dripping from the tip of the knife.
And quite frankly, your "Repetition" work too. flowed neatly. nice work.
once again, welcome to neopoet.