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The Grateful Fire
As I roast and I toast
I’m most proud to be host
To those, who make me glow
As they eat and warm up their toes
Be it a friend or a foe
As I glow and I show
My display I can certainly say
Soon, is end of my days
Although right now I thrive
They won’t keep me alive
They’ll pack up and go back inside
And leave me to shrink as I die
And yet with sparks that I spit
I don’t scorn those who sit
I’m still pleased that I’ve lived
I say thank you to them: I’ve been lit
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