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Grapefruit and Sugar

Submitted by Kristen H. on Thu, 2024-02-15 20:05

For all the love I have
Of the sand and sea
The rays of the sun
The rain and the mountains...

For all the love I have
Of yellow flowers
Grapefruit and sugar
The smiles of strangers...

For all the love I have
Of snow and hot showers
Music and sweet coffee
Driving at night...

I love you
Most of all

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing stage:

Editing - draft

Contest:

Neopoet Weekly 02/11/24 to 02/17/24

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

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Fri, 2024-02-16 02:10

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2024-02-16 04:33

Dear Kristen,

this is a really good love poem.

*hugs, Cat

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Kristen H.

Fri, 2024-02-16 09:19

Thank you...

So much, Cat!

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Lavender

Fri, 2024-02-16 08:49