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I Miss You

Submitted by Kristen H. on Tue, 2024-02-20 21:51

We didn't talk today

You couldn't even look at me

But that's not even the worst part

The worst part is...

I know I can't fix it.
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I can't turn back the clock
And make a new ending

I can't go back
And do things differently

I can't unsay the things I said
Or undo the things I've done.

So here we are.
Two friends
Turned lovers
Turned strangers once more.

And I can't even tell you I miss you.

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neopoet

Wed, 2024-02-21 03:51

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Geezer

Wed, 2024-02-21 15:34

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remorse, thoroughly mixed in the aching hole of where love used to be... Sorry for the poor soul that experiences this,
~ Geez.
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Kristen H.

Wed, 2024-02-21 19:51

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Truly a sad experience... I'm happy that I was able to convey this feeling well enough that it's understood.

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