The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem demonstrates a strong grasp of rhythm and meter, which contributes to its overall flow. The use of metaphors, such as "Dark black hole" and "Charon waits for me," effectively conveys the speaker's feelings of despair and longing for escape. However, the poem could benefit from further exploration of these metaphors to deepen the reader's understanding of the speaker's emotional state.

The poem's theme of isolation and longing for companionship is clear and well-developed. However, the transition from the speaker's desire to "take a brother or two with me" to the fear of being alone could be more smoothly executed. Clarifying the relationship between these two sentiments could enhance the poem's emotional impact.

The final stanza, with its mention of "precious energy," introduces a new concept that could be further developed. If this energy is a metaphor for something else, such as the speaker's life force or contributions to the world, additional context or elaboration could make this metaphor more impactful.

Lastly, the poem's structure could be more consistent. Most stanzas have four lines, but some have two or three. Standardizing the stanza structure could improve the poem's rhythm and readability.

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I had a very strong reaction to this poem. I want to reach out and take your hand and walk with you, while you tell me your story. I am very sad that you feel so alone in life. There is one positive thing that comes from your profound pain... your wonderful poetry!

*hugs, Cat