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Fantasies of February Fourteenth

Come-to-bed whispers in candlelight
soft music silenced by slight sighs
empty blushing champagne flutes
smooth dark chocolate lips
velvet warming silk
scattered stockings
legs engaged
breathless
heat

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
A Valentine's Day Nonet
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Really engaging. I love the romance and visuals conveying the romance. I like the form as well. Beautiful write.

~RoseBlack~

Ha! It's more like sci-fi, now. :) But I have some beautiful Valentine's Day memories!
Thank you for reading!
L

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I love the form and the way each line brings the reader closer to the ultimate conclusion. The word choices bring each line to life in the mind's eye. A beautiful write.

Thanx,
Steve

It was a fun write - a little whimsy.
Thank you so much for reading!
L

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did you notice that you can also read this poem from bottom to top? I Love it! You have a pioneering soul!

* many hugs, Cat

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Ha, ha! I didn't realize that! I love this challenging form - 9 lines, 9 syllables in the first line and then syllable count decreases with each following line. I have read some nonet-style poems with word count, instead of syllables, and there is a reverse nonet. It's a fun challenge.
Thank you for reading!
L

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I liked the waay it read from bottom to top. Either way it created beautiful images
Great writing!

The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!

A bit of fun for Valentine's Day...
Thank you for reading! I appreciate it!
L

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