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It Buzzed My Om

Submitted by Lavender on Thu, 2024-07-25 11:05

at peace with eyes closed
my sweet Zen was chased away
pesky mosquito

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2024-07-25 11:23

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Ack!! that will do it every time, lol.

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Lavender

Thu, 2024-07-25 16:37

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I suppose if my Zen was a bit clearer, even the pesky mosquito wouldn't bother me!
Thank you for reading!
Lx

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Rula

Fri, 2024-07-26 03:01

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I will absolutely remember you and this annoying mosquito every time I got a mosquito bite:)
A very creative haiku dear.
Thank you for presenting"om". A always great to read you dear.

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Lavender

Fri, 2024-07-26 13:10

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These hot, humid conditions really bring on the mosquitoes! Thank you for visiting and reading this little ditty. Your comments mean a lot to me.
Lx

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Leslie

Fri, 2024-07-26 20:19

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I LOVE IT A PERFECT SENTIMENT!

Today never knows what tommorow will bring!

Lavender

Fri, 2024-07-26 21:25

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It definitely crashed my peaceful state of mind!
Thank you for reading, Leslie!
L

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