The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "All Hallow's Eve" demonstrates a strong command of imagery and rhythm, which effectively contributes to the overall mood and tone. However, there are areas that could benefit from further development or clarification.

1. Consistency in Meter: The poem seems to follow a loose tetrameter, but this is not consistent throughout. For instance, the lines "A ghostly plan was hatched" and "When he could return, he would" disrupt the rhythm. Revising these lines to fit the established meter could improve the flow of the poem.

2. Clarity in Imagery: While the poem uses vivid imagery, some metaphors could be clarified for better understanding. For example, "Bending my limbs like a dying tree" could be interpreted in many ways. Is the speaker physically manipulated or is this a metaphor for emotional or psychological control? Clarifying this could enhance the reader's comprehension.

3. Development of Theme: The theme of love and loss is clear, but the supernatural elements could be further developed. The ghostly figure's intentions and the speaker's relationship to him remain somewhat vague. Providing more details could enrich the narrative and emotional impact of the poem.

4. Use of Language: The poem uses archaic language ("crook'd") which adds a gothic feel. However, this is not consistent throughout the poem. Deciding whether to maintain this language style throughout or to modernize the diction could enhance the poem's overall cohesion.

5. Punctuation: The poem lacks consistent punctuation, which can make the reading experience challenging. Introducing punctuation could help guide the reader through the poem's narrative and emotional shifts.

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enjoyed this offering of spooky love
Once again, you have chosen a form of rhyme that is hard to execute without the right poem.
Only a few places I would change anything.
With a few minor adjustments, you can make this smoother than butter.

Through the veil I see
Shadows of who he used to be
Calling out from witches' night
I answer him with no fright

His strength and power is unmatched
And so, a ghostly plan was hatched
Grabbing, pulling and holding me
My limbs are bent, a dying tree

For my money, I would leave out the third stanza altogether
It's difficult to fix, and doesn't add anything to the theme

I suggest that you write the rest of the poem out [on paper, if necessary.]
and use the same words, adding or subtracting syllables until you feel it click into place.
That's the way I do it when I don't have a clear way to express the idea of the line
without ditching the whole line or key words. Sometimes, a word just doesn't fit; be ruthless!
Cut that sucker out! Put it back in the freezer for another meal. ~ Geez.
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Very good! You had it all right there. ~ Geez.
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Very good poem. Fits right in with the Halloween theme. Rhyme is well done.
Congrats!

Wow the draft process in action yielded amazing.
None is misspelled noone but this is excellent.

I very much enjoyed this Halloween poem. it is lovely and macabre at the same time! I love that about it.

*love Cat & eddy styx

Hello, Carrie,
"My limbs are bent, a dying tree..." I feel it! A great line. The enticement was just too much! A chilling, but seductive poem.
Happy Halloween!
L