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Man I'm Talking to You
Player playing
isolate mind eye
fluid body politics
conflict columns compass
upon altar
strange crooked beings
acquire quakes akin to mine
one needed a beloved
less wane jewels to freaks
man . . .
you were once the perfect whim
tender enormous rhythms, polemics & birdie Haiku
happy with the Motown sound
set in old wax; newly found
soft-pedaling down memory lane
"Ooh-oo child" up the 5 Stairsteps
ascend empyrean
Ooo-oo . . . soulful real
frequent obscurity
awaiting lavender morning's
I resent a box kisser
did you not understand
man . . . a request for an unwrinkled smooch
© 2012 Lepadah
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Willy
Wed, 2012-03-21 20:47
man I'm talking to you
something had me reading this poem over and over again.......up to now i can't seem to place my finger on it..........it is just appealing to me. if have to quote it will be the whole piece.....so i will just say i loved it....
always
willy
Lepadah
Thu, 2012-03-22 13:47
comment
Hello Willy,
Truly humble by your comment/read.
Thanks peace Lepadah
Lepadah
Eduardo Cruz
Thu, 2012-03-22 23:49
girl
you went old school on us. i am starting to become a fan.
"Ooo-oo child, things are going to get easier"
great use of the classic music.
Eddie
...
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
Lepadah
Thu, 2012-03-29 17:27
re: comment
Hello Eddie,
lol . . . likewise sir. Happy you enjoyed this one.
Peace 1 Lepadah
Lepadah