The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem demonstrates a strong command of rhyme and rhythm, which helps to establish a consistent narrative flow. The use of a whimsical narrative and anthropomorphized characters is reminiscent of traditional fables and fairy tales, which can be an effective tool for engaging readers.

However, there are areas that could benefit from further refinement. For instance, the poem could use more vivid and specific imagery to fully immerse the reader in the scene. While the poem does provide some description of the rabbit and the hole, more detailed and sensory language could help to bring these elements to life. For example, instead of simply describing the rabbit as "brown," the poem could delve into the texture of its fur, the shine in its eyes, or the speed of its movements.

Additionally, the poem's narrative could be made clearer. While the poem does tell a story, some of the events and motivations of the characters are not fully explained. For example, it's unclear why the protagonist is chasing the rabbit, or why they decide to jump down the hole. Providing more context or backstory could help to make the narrative more engaging and understandable.

Finally, the poem's use of language and syntax could be more consistent. There are several instances where the poem uses archaic or formal language, such as "whilst" and "spy," but also uses more casual and modern language, like "dogging" and "mad chase." While mixing different styles of language can sometimes be effective, in this case it may be distracting or confusing for the reader. It might be beneficial to choose one style of language and stick to it throughout the poem.

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too many people seem to be going down the rabbit hole lately

Hello, Cat,
A whimsical trip! April foolish fun is the best kind of fun!
Lx

One question, though. In the first line of the second verse you mention “dogging.” My first thought was rodeo which obviously was wrong, LOL. What did you mean? I can usually follow your work easily, but sister, you stumped me on this one.

Thanks for sharing this fun romp.

I'm sorry I've missed this one, but guess it's never late.
This gave me a broad smile this morning and I thought how a clever way to say that someone is fooled.
An enjoyable read as always.
Thank you for sharing dear.

Curiouser and curiouser...one pill makes you larger...and one pill makes you small...what a wonderful take on one of my favorite stories. the rabbit sounds typical...no time for anyone but themselves.