The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "The Grifter" presents a narrative that is clear and engaging, which is a strength in storytelling. However, there are a few areas that could be improved for a more impactful reading experience.

Firstly, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and rhyme scheme. The current structure seems somewhat uneven, which can disrupt the flow of the narrative. A consistent rhythm can help to guide the reader through the story and enhance the overall impact of the poem.

Secondly, the poem could use more vivid and specific imagery. While the narrative is clear, the descriptions of the characters and events are somewhat generic. By using more specific and sensory language, the poem could create a more immersive and emotionally resonant experience for the reader.

Lastly, the poem could explore the emotional depth of the characters more thoroughly. The poem tells the story of a woman being deceived and betrayed, which is a deeply emotional experience. By delving into the emotions of the characters, the poem could create a deeper connection with the reader and add another layer of complexity to the narrative.

In conclusion, while the poem presents a clear and engaging narrative, it could be improved by incorporating a more consistent rhythm, using more vivid and specific imagery, and exploring the emotional depth of the characters.

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Though I'm not a big fan of story-telling poetry, however I I have enjoyed the story. The title is well chosen as it makes it clear for the reader what is he going to read about. The plot is very clear and flows smoothly through out (though I had to agree with AI that a more consistent meter will help for a smoother flow) and tells the story of many women who have been deceived by such.
If I would suggest something I would suggest adding one or two line by the end to warn the other women or/ and tell how did the protagonist lived after that. How could she heal, but this is only a suggestion that is not necessarily needed.
Thank you for sharing dear.

Hello, Cat,
A narrative poem. I have heard this scenario a few times, and you have provided much detail. You've captured the frustration and naivete of the victims, and the cunning ways of the grifter. I noticed you actually gave the guy a name, and I'm hoping this is not in any way a personal experience. If not, it might be best to not give him a name so that the reader stays indifferent to him, and he doesn't sway from being anything but a "Grifter" - if that makes sense? Tight rhyme throughout.
Thank you!
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hello Cat,
This makes me wonder if it is a specific true story - either way, it will always be eternally true. I read somewhere that 3% of all people are true psychopaths, who survive by praying on the best most empathetic, innocent people.

I think the poem was very well structured and had a nice rhythm. I wish I could write like this more often. Well done!

So, when does "Jim" get taken? Looking forward to it.

I enjoyed reading this poem! For the most part, the rhythm is tight; however, there are a couple of places where the wording is stilted. Overall, very nice! I also liked that the rhyming was not heavy-handed.