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Raw Rhymes
Let all your raw rhymes
flow free as a stream.
In good and bad times,
like gold dust they'll gleam.
Your poems, like prayers,
send straight from your heart.
Then you and your cares
will peacefully part.
Your valuable verse
is treasure - dig deep!
Those lines that you nurse
I want you to weep.
Sow stanzas like seed
and one day you'll reap.
From heart they made bleed
all sorrow will seep!
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my poor little rhymes
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neopoet
Tue, 2023-05-23 12:22
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Seren
Tue, 2023-05-23 13:34
Hello you
Not poor at all, its quite sadly beautiful,
I absolutely love the last two lines.
It's lovely to read you again.
Kind regards
Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Blue-eyed Bolla
Wed, 2023-05-24 02:21
Raw Rhymes
Many thanks, Jane.
KBloor
Tiffany Smith
Tue, 2023-05-23 14:24
wonderful
very heartfelt i enjoyed reading it
Tiffany K. Smith
Blue-eyed Bolla
Wed, 2023-05-24 02:22
Raw Rhymes
Many thanks, Tiffany.
KBloor