The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "War Into Homes" makes a compelling commentary on the impact of media in bringing the realities of war into domestic spaces. The use of repetitive phrases like "in the living room" and "in full color" effectively emphasizes the intrusion of war into everyday life. However, the poem could benefit from more vivid and specific imagery. For instance, instead of saying "The horror of it all," the poem could describe specific scenes that encapsulate this horror.

The poem also seems to be trying to evoke an emotional response from the reader, particularly with lines like "Fathers, sons, and brothers / Never to come home." However, the poem might be more effective if it delved deeper into the emotional impact of these losses. Instead of stating the loss outright, the poem could show the reader the emptiness left behind, perhaps through the perspective of the families waiting at home.

The question mark at the end of "Toward eternal peace?" introduces a note of ambiguity that could be further explored. The poem might benefit from more exploration of this uncertainty. Is it a question of whether death in war truly brings peace? Or is it a question of whether the war itself has brought any sort of peace? Exploring these questions could add depth to the poem's commentary on war.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm or meter. The current structure is somewhat irregular, which can disrupt the flow of the poem. A more consistent rhythm could make the poem more engaging and impactful.

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Hello, Paul,
Yes, the count was announced every single night. It was horrible - real and unreal at the same time. It also was very personal and brought the pain and suffering directly into our homes. A respectful poem.
Thank you,
L