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True Marriage

Submitted by Clentin on Tue, 2023-12-05 08:40

Every heartbeat counts
Our love grows deeper each hour
Enduring and true

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Tue, 2023-12-05 08:41

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great haiku, by Clentin! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch

Tue, 2023-12-05 08:50

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when it is about people, it is called a senryu, I think.

and this is a good one!

*hugs and love, Cat

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Clentin

Tue, 2023-12-05 08:58

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Thank you, also for reminding me of the poem form, senyru.

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Geezer

Wed, 2023-12-06 10:14

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are right it is senryu. Good catch...~ Geez.
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Clentin

Tue, 2023-12-05 08:56

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Thanks, I always seem to follow up with a shorter poem

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RoseBlack

Tue, 2023-12-05 09:40

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Haiku may be your specialty! Well done!

~RoseBlack~

Clentin

Tue, 2023-12-05 11:43

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Thank you Rose i appreciate your reading my poems and for suggestions

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