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True Marriage
Every heartbeat counts
Our love grows deeper each hour
Enduring and true
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Geezer
Tue, 2023-12-05 08:41
Another...
great haiku, by Clentin! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-12-05 08:50
Dear Geezer and Clentin,
when it is about people, it is called a senryu, I think.
and this is a good one!
*hugs and love, Cat
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Clentin
Tue, 2023-12-05 08:58
Thank you, also for reminding
Thank you, also for reminding me of the poem form, senyru.
Geezer
Wed, 2023-12-06 10:14
You...
are right it is senryu. Good catch...~ Geez.
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Clentin
Tue, 2023-12-05 08:56
Thanks, I always seem to
Thanks, I always seem to follow up with a shorter poem
RoseBlack
Tue, 2023-12-05 09:40
I think
Haiku may be your specialty! Well done!
~RoseBlack~
Clentin
Tue, 2023-12-05 11:43
Thank you Rose i appreciate
Thank you Rose i appreciate your reading my poems and for suggestions