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Sunshine

Submitted by Clentin on Mon, 2023-02-20 06:53

Clouds move by too fast
Exposing light and brightness
Creating warmth below

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Not Explicit Content

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Seren

Mon, 2023-02-20 07:10

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Another cracking three-line poem, I am so taken with this one I see the clouds moving past and the suns heat warming my face in those minuscule moments. Here in Australia in the summer the heat is there clouds or no. but in the winter, this is the how it is where I live which is classed as sub-tropical.

At the moment its 11pm and the heat is incredible tonight.

I went totally off topic I apologise your poem took me away.

Kindest Regards Seren

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Clentin

Mon, 2023-02-20 07:21

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Thank you. I am trying to write a haiku or similar poems with different ideas, nature as well as other
Types of feeling.

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Candlewitch

Mon, 2023-02-20 08:14

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nicely done! btw, did you get the p.m. I sent you yesterday? I hope it helped you.

*hugs, Cat

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Clentin

Mon, 2023-02-20 09:41

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Thank you. I did get your email. I am trying to figure out how to use this site

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Rosewood Apothecary

Mon, 2023-02-20 18:24

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I think this one strengthens the last though. Being that they’re meant to be related I think that I’ll go back and check that last one.

Tim

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