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Best Anniversary

Best anniversary, a day so sweet
A time to celebrate our love complete
The years have passed, yet our bond still strong
In each other's arms is where we belong

We've weathered storms and danced in the rain
Our hearts intertwined, forever the same
On this special day, we look back with pride
And toast to the love that will never subside

So here's to us, to the journey we've shared
To the memories made and the love we've declared
Happy anniversary, my love, my dear
In your arms, I have nothing to fear.

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The poem "Best Anniversary" effectively uses traditional rhyming schemes and consistent meter to convey a sense of celebration and enduring love. The use of imagery, such as "weathered storms" and "danced in the rain," adds depth to the narrative and allows the reader to visualize the experiences of the speaker.

However, the poem could benefit from more specific details or unique imagery to make it more distinctive and engaging. For instance, instead of using a common phrase like "In each other's arms is where we belong," the poem could describe a specific moment or shared experience that encapsulates the couple's bond.

The last line, "In your arms, I have nothing to fear," is a strong ending that effectively communicates the speaker's trust and comfort in their partner. However, the poem could explore this sentiment further by showing how the speaker's partner provides a sense of security or peace.

In terms of structure, the poem maintains a consistent ABAB rhyme scheme and similar line lengths throughout, which creates a pleasing rhythm and flow. However, varying the structure or rhythm could add interest and help to emphasize key points or emotions.

Overall, the poem successfully conveys a sense of enduring love and celebration, but could be enhanced by incorporating more specific details or unique imagery, and by varying the structure or rhythm to add interest and emphasis.

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a well worked out poem, both in, in effective rhymes and ten beat lines. In poetry articles are not as gramatically necessary as in prose. I think there are places where you add an article, and places where you can remove one, to keep your 10 beat lines more consistant.


The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

Thank you for reading and your comments. I will review it again.

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a lovely dedication to a sweet lady. I'm sure she will be happy to read it. Such a priveladge !

Happy anniversary to you both.
Thank you for sharing.


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Thank you for your kind remarks.

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I completely am sucked in by this poem. It is what we all want. Great, great almost perfect poem. If one exists.

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Thank you. 56 years together has taught us many things, things we both love.

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It's a sweet feeling, I loved it!

Thank you very much! I appreciate your reading and comments

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