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Spring
Spring Spring,
Is a beautiful thing,
Where flowers grow,
And the birds sing.
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Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Last few words:
This is the first poem I wrote at 6 years old and my teacher said I would grow up to be an Eccentric writer, thus the Eccentric Poet was born!
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
The Eccentric poet
Sun, 2021-03-21 01:40
Hi Mark
Awww tyvm lovely.
The Eccentric poet
Sun, 2021-03-21 17:20
Hi Teddy
Awww thankyou so much xxxxx
Geezer
Sun, 2021-03-21 08:52
Your teacher...
was right! Eccentricity is purely a matter of opinion, but if you ask me, all poets have the trait; else we would not share our thoughts with the world. I'm glad that your teacher's words had that effect on you; to help you so many years later, share this first poem with us. ~ Geez
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The Eccentric poet
Sun, 2021-03-21 17:22
Thankyou
Hiya I got the bug at 6 and just couldn't stop, fell in love with writing xx
Lavender
Sun, 2021-03-21 20:20
Spring
Hello!
How wise you were at 6 years old! One could add many words but your 6-year-old self nailed it with the most honest, descriptive, and poetic language. Darling poem!
Thank you!
Lavender
The Eccentric poet
Mon, 2021-03-22 20:17
Thankyou
Thankyou so much xxx