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Spring

Submitted by The Eccentric poet on Sat, 2021-03-20 23:00

Spring Spring,
Is a beautiful thing,
Where flowers grow,
And the birds sing.

Review Request (Intensity):

Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Last few words:

This is the first poem I wrote at 6 years old and my teacher said I would grow up to be an Eccentric writer, thus the Eccentric Poet was born!

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

The Eccentric poet

Sun, 2021-03-21 01:40

Hi Mark

Awww tyvm lovely.

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The Eccentric poet

Sun, 2021-03-21 17:20

Hi Teddy

Awww thankyou so much xxxxx

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Geezer

Sun, 2021-03-21 08:52

was right! Eccentricity is purely a matter of opinion, but if you ask me, all poets have the trait; else we would not share our thoughts with the world. I'm glad that your teacher's words had that effect on you; to help you so many years later, share this first poem with us. ~ Geez

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The Eccentric poet

Sun, 2021-03-21 17:22

Thankyou

Hiya I got the bug at 6 and just couldn't stop, fell in love with writing xx

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Lavender

Sun, 2021-03-21 20:20

Spring

Hello!
How wise you were at 6 years old! One could add many words but your 6-year-old self nailed it with the most honest, descriptive, and poetic language. Darling poem!
Thank you!
Lavender

The Eccentric poet

Mon, 2021-03-22 20:17

Thankyou

Thankyou so much xxx

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