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Escape

Submitted by The Eccentric poet on Thu, 2022-06-16 00:01

What I was I am no longer,
I am older and I'm stronger,
What I've achieved, I've done alone
You were gone and I have grown.

Never again am I blooded and beaten,
In your world that I felt so incomplete in.
Didn't stay strewn and ill-tempered tossed
I escaped, and you have lost.

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Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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Last few words: 
Just bouncing ideas around for a domestic abuse poem, not complete yet
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-06-16 05:07

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you have a very good start... I will pay attention and wait for you to continue this piece. you never disappoint! I hope you are well.

* warm hugs, Cat

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The Eccentric poet

Thu, 2022-06-16 09:58

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It is a work in progress, I have been having bad dreams and flashbacks recently so I decided to write something punchy and positive to be my hearts anthem.

I am well I hope you are too x

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